All Comments on 'The Mother I Never Knew Ch. 04'

did your editor quit you on this chapter? Suddenly you can't go 2 paragraphs without an embarrassing error that got through spell check but makes no sense. And psychologists and psychiatrists and psychoanalysts are not the same thing. You can Google that. Your analysis of the dynamics of Subs reads like a comic book version. This was a very good story that abruptly went off the rails.

A well put together chapter! Thank you!

Your writing is so enjoyable to read. The emotions portrayed by the characters are perfect and the storyline just keeps getting better. Keep it up and give a big thanks to the editors

Thanks

Tx Cracker

I sent it to my technical editor yesterday so I hope to have it posted real soon. I can't make promises about when he'll have it done, I can give some previews to those who want a peek.

Just wondering if you are doing a chapter 5

really great, complicated story-hope you do a Ch 5 at some point-thanks-

Have really liked this series. Please keep them coming!

Thanks for sharing.

You should continie this srory longer, BUT FINISH OTHER STORIES YOU HAVE ALREADY WRITTEN: like FIGHTING FOR BROKEN TRUST, CHRISTIAN COLLEGE SEX COMEDY,WHAT MY BROTHER LEFT ME, ???????????????????

Awesome story!! Is there anyway to not let another month go by before the next chapter? haha!

Another great chapter that left me looking forward to the next one :)

It gets better and better. When the 4 of you get "comfortable" with each other then perhaps it's time to turn the good Doctor and Nadia into slaves. Just a thought.

You can't stop here! Show us that Natalie is an 'Owned Slut'!

Another update to this delightful story! It looks like the family is now whole, with Natalie, Sienna and Heidi completing what seemed to be an intended foursome. I can't wait to read MORE!!!