by RiskyGirl
Great story! I( wish I could go on a tour like that!
Great job!
This is quite a Tour with big game involved as well. I was left wondering, did the hunters Shoot??
lol!!!
...the story is not too outrageous, doesn't 'take advantage' of anyone or featured "forced" anything. Stories with people having a little adult fun and involving only adults are more responsible and desirable than SOME of the other ones on Literotica! I like the style of this one, although a few scenes seemed to be incompletely described (missing complete descriptions of characters names, actions etc). It is okay though, I up the exciting efforts!!
...looks like Alan knew exactly what a firecracker his wife was, even if she held back this time.<br>
So is this before or after Rian's rugby club adventures with Carl? If the latter, what happened to Alan? Something as abrupt as Tom's fatal stroke in "The Farewell Party"?
Another good story. Can't believe some readers seem to be editors in chief and just want to pick holes and complain about other stories on here. You're reading THIS story, not others. Just read it and enjoy it.