All Comments on 'The Mouse that Roared'

What an excellent piece of writing, it just drove me to use the "deleted expletive" in the title of this comment. The slow tentative build up teased me into believing this was just going to be another dull, albeit well written, flashing story.

But, and this is the big but! Your explosive conclusion took me totally by surprise and then just blew me away. What a wonderfully erotic yet still carefully controlled description you give of your "big scene".

This is pulsatingly hot eroticism that does not slip into the filthy mire of pornography.

Well done, just like a great meal, it leaves me satisfied but still wanting more.

"Wow" seems to sum it up nicely. I agree wholeheartedly with the previous comment. It was already a lovely, well-written exposure story but that snowball effect and the fire-cracker ending was magical.

Now that is what I call erotic literature - well done, and then some.

Absolutely no touching? You had me fooled, my literary friend! I'd greatly enjoyed "The Twins' Birthday" even though you stopped short of "having it all" on that one. You're an endearing "mouse" - you made me "want it all" with you! Care for some cheese?... :)

Moved along at jus the right pace to be provacative and exciting. Loved the plot. Can't wait to see more.

Do all these cockold wannabees come from. Not swinging, not threesoms with two woman just fuck the shit out of my loving wife cause you can't have a good marriage till you have a slut wife. Well I guess I'm just stuck with a bad marriage, even thou having a faithfull loving wife feels pretty damm good.

I doubt the previous commentor even read the story. He was not reading the same story I read. I thought this was well done and very erotic. Thanks.-- UK CYNIC

I loved this story and wish there were more out there like this one. Very sensual and erotic. Hope you keep writing.

Beautifully paced - even if I began to want you to hurry up! Call me naive, but I still didn't expect the threesome to happen, even as the couple started to make love, because you were so convincing as a shy woman new to this exhibitionism. The transformation was totally convincing and the threesome was very hotly described. Thanks!