All Comments on 'The Murdered Football Player Ch. 02'

Well written; interesting story..Look forward to more

Not sure why there aren’t more recent comments on this story. It’s very well written and a nice change of pace from the short sex filled stories we most often get here at the lit site. Don’t get me wrong, I like the short stories as well if they are well thought out, but I appreciate the effort this author puts into his work.

Some of these characters are first introduced in "Todd & Melina" series. The character development is not consistent through the various series, such as the original then later " Interludes."

In this series, the main character Don, is described as an ROTC graduate, who did some time on active duty, as an officer, then became a cop. Yet when first originally introduced, he gets some sort of IT job straight out of college, then becomes a cop at age 28. His time in ROTC is never discussed, in the earlier series.

In this series he's presented as some sort of tough guy. Yet in the earlier series, he's shown as a willing cuck, who likes watching other men, fuck his wife, which by definition makes him a pansy ass wimp. I can see the author toughening Don up, through the years. Even so, how does the author account for the missing active duty Army years, in the earlier series?

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Developing nicely again. No quibbles on characters or their history.

*****Great piece of crime drama. Thanks for sharing.