by tenderhead37
you left out some query parts of the story, and the end had a "get'r done" feel to it. but all in all it was slightly enjoyable.
brilliant story so very erotic cant wait to read more of your awesome stories
such a very hot horny gifted writer. reading this was like watching as one after the other of men fuck and cum up and over your body. out stand.
by far. so very exciting to read love it from start to finish.
writing stories as you do,there can only be great on to cum.
agree with the comment about the finish - just trying to get to the end but otherwise very hot ... would like to hear if that was the start of a lifetime of bondage / group sex
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Was hoping there might be additional chapters to this one! :-(
For some reason this reminded me of the sitcom The Nanny, with Fran Drescher? The way Philip talked just made me think he was British, which led me to think of Philip being Maxwell and Kristine being Fran, the nanny. Overall, very nice story, but the resemblance to the show made me absolutely horny!