All Comments on 'The Next Step'

This is one the best written CBT type stories on Literotia!

Please let us have some more!

I second the first comment. This is marvelous. Please continue his agony! m

came across this story using the story spinner... and this is a new one for me. can't say it got me horny, but it's incredibly well written. and scary, since CBT is not my scene!

Still, nice writing! =)

Hope you write more about that lucky man's balls. My Mistress will use it on me I am sure

All the mis-spellings really detract from the story. As an example, "The candle light danced in her eyes, and her red lipstick passively glowed <b>(passive = lacking in energy or will; somehow I don't think you meant her red lipstick was lacking in energy or will - perhaps you meant her red lips glowed sensuously?)</b> as she sipped her wine. I slowly climbed into bed, but <b>butt</b> naked and laid down next to her. I could smell her sweet perfume, and was as kiddy <b>giddy</b> as a teenage about to have his first sexual experience." <br><br>

Otherwise, a fairly good description of a couple expanding the boundaries of their sex life, to mutual satisfaction

Great story. Needs editing though.

very good story. enjoyed everything about it. as a cbt newbie i love having my balls squeezed.