All Comments on 'The Nice Guy's Bachelor Party'

There were so many spelling, tense, and grammar mistakes that it took away from the story. The mistakes could have been tolerable if there weren't gaps all the way through. Like in one paragraph something is starting and in the next it's over, leaving the reader rather annoyed.

I gave it one star because that was the lowest rating I could give. Your writing makes me wish I was illiterate. Which you apparently are; functionally at least.