All Comments on 'The Novice'

Ghastly, stereotypical, and devoid of realism. Try again.

I thought fron the title this was going to be a story about a naughty nun,never mind still quite entertaining

I feel sorry for those who are so inferior that they feel a need to dominate a woman and call her it's slut.

BB, this is a fine first story, filled with tasty details. Thanks for sharing your gifts with us.

An excellent start, BB... Enjoyed reading the story...esp. the part about discipline! *grins*

A good start! I look forward to reading some more of your stories, should you write more.

Nice job! Keep up the good work

Excellent first story. Keep it up! I look forward to reading more.

Realism is not why one reads adult stories. Its an escape, picturing it happening through the words. Not trying to think if any of it is believable.

Good start, write more.