All Comments on 'The Novice'

That was so amazing... I don't know how many times I came, but seriously, you have talent! Please please keep writing!!!!

Please continue this story. You are really talented.

I certainly would be one of those nuns fingering myself, but please, more

Very "enjoyable" story telling. Please continue the story. You have left it open ended, so there are a number of paths it could take. I would be interested in reading which one you choose. I enjoyed your writing style and of course the content very much. Please, continue....

Anal rape her.

Arousing like viegra beautiful made me hard like a Granite cock wow

Definitely continue the story!

Yes, I want more...made my clit throb

Why did she call him Milady?

yes please continue writing

Please keep writing!

Yes please, need more!

Please continue!! your story is awesome.

Please continue!!

You write well with a knowledge of erotica that escapes many!

Oh God, YES!

This story has incredible potential!

Over the years, I still find myself coming back to this story, including its following chapters.

Compelling, well-written, and deliciously salacious. If you ever find yourself wanting to add more chapters to it, I certainly won't complain. ;)

I keep coming back to this series. Please please give us more of this incredibly hot series.

Your story is wonderful, I love all your writings. The depth of the storylines, and how you draw your readers in is fantastic, and as always proper grammer and spelling really lets things flow. However the description of the "not quite sex" between Aubrey and Lukas really threw me because such a thing would not be possible due to the hymen not being inside the vagina, but at the beginning. No penetration can occur without going through that membrane. At best one can put the cock between the labia, or press it against the hymen. And hymens are stretchy, so that can be a thing, and enjoyable too. But the cock would not be inside. Again, you are a wonderful writer, and I hope you will continue writing many more brilliant stories! I am so appreciative of authors like you who create such good erotica.

U have coupled the exact right balance of beauty and lust😊BRAVO fromHoneyGirl and, YES, more is very welcome😁

please dont leave us hanging at this point in your story......you must continue.....thanx sharri

Your story is absolutely fantastic!! Loved it!

She really wants to be a woman. Plow through that maiden head, get her pregnant then marry her. She will then be ready for a house full of kiddies. It sounds to me that is what she really desires deep down in her lustful heart. Enjoy!

WOW! First this is extremely well written with a great deal of detail! I loved how it has just enough detail but not too much where it becomes boring. Second, this is a HOT story that I was able to relate to as my name is Audrey and I almost became a nun!!! Hand to GOD! Wild! Needless to say, I was able to enjoy this thoroughly! ;) Also I'll be reading the rest of the stories but right now I'm kind of sorry to say rooting for "Lucas" ;)

Next installment please.

This is s wonderful story.. well written, just enough action, but another cliff hanger. Nothing has been added since 2004. Sad really, had so much potential.

The story is exquisite! Please continue

You must continue this story. It’s exquisite.

love this story please continue

Love the story!

I would love to hear mor of this story

I need to know.

Yes please continue!

Please continue!!!!

To add my voice to others, yes please!

Yes, please. I need more of this. Soooo delicious!

Fucking yes I want more

it is so rare nowadays that I find an erotica that makes me want to touch myself so badly.. your writing is exquisite and I have a terrible priest fetish since the Original Sinners came out. Please, please continue this..

Beautifully written, thoroughly enticing and deliciously erotic.

Please do complete this delicious tale.

So sexy! Love this story, hoping you finish it soon.

I can't tell you how many otherwise well written stories are ruined by the fact that the hymen is *not* somewhere "up inside" the vagina.

fantastic. i’m wondering when i can become an Counselor at a convent just like these guys

i’ve heard “real” stories about similar goings on at convents over the years , but doubted any widespread ( sorry for that word) veracity. I wonder if our Holy Mother ; The Church is as delightful or sinful as we’re seeing here., but I’d sure like to be able to enjoy and to give enjoyment without any penalty like these dudes , no ?

“The Saints preserve us ! “

Finish the story please. It’s will written

Please take a course in Female Anatomy. You will find that the Hymen is not half way up the vagina!! Maidenhead as you call it, sorry I laughed at that as Maidenhead is a town near where I live, it's near Windsor!! And some girls are born without Hymen's, some with very small ones, every woman is different!! And it doesn't completely cover the entrance to the vagina, otherwise how would menstrual blood come out?!! Apart from that, you start serial stories off but don't finish them. Maybe there should be an * by the stories anyone writes but doesn't finish, so we can decide whether to read them or not....and as you have not finished this one, not reading any more, as what's the point with no ending?!! From Frustrated of near Maidenhead 🤣 !!