All Comments on 'The Object of Forbidden Desire Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Wow

Someone actually understands erotica! Great story, went back and read the first one. Thanks and I can't wait for the rest!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Hot...but creepy

With all the drugs is she going to kill him via accidental overdose? It seems she's getting quite desperate and out of control with her obsession. She's just a few steps shy of keeping him in a drugged out stupor and chained in her basement to use and abuse at will.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Keep them coming

Great story and you have left the door wide open. Keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

he could have notice it the nail marks...

dark2donut2dark2donut2almost 3 years ago

So far so good, exciting. But now you need to expand your plot and change the direction.

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