by tentativeteller
So far so good, exciting. But now you need to expand your plot and change the direction.
Great story and you have left the door wide open. Keep them coming.
With all the drugs is she going to kill him via accidental overdose? It seems she's getting quite desperate and out of control with her obsession. She's just a few steps shy of keeping him in a drugged out stupor and chained in her basement to use and abuse at will.
Someone actually understands erotica! Great story, went back and read the first one. Thanks and I can't wait for the rest!