All Comments on 'The Obsession'

Good start, curious if you'll continue and show how Gary's obession continues.

If you stick a GI Joe up your ass does that make you gay?

One of the better stories I've read in the "Gay Male" genre on this site. Hopefully there's a part 2.

you should really continue this

Good story, well paced and credible. Story loses continuity and impact because of so many errors in spelling, grammar and punctuation. Also, the final line is not satisfying as it leaves the reader no idea what might becomes of the two men.