All Comments on 'The Odd Couple Down The Road'

Your story starts great, sets up the situation well and then seems to hurry to the ending.

The writing needs a bit of editing but is good. There are details that could have made the story more interesting, more intimate, hotter, and even more of a character study. What about his wife? She was very supportive, but stayed away while they played? They only play once?

With Scorpio. Great beginning but I had problems with the wife handing her husband over so easily. Maybe a little more set-up was needed. Were the couple swingers? It seemed very open minded of his wife but as a man's fantasy, it certainly worked. Anyway, it was different and I enjoyed it. :)

Just a sexy read, well planed.