All Comments on 'The Office Team-Building Day Ch. 10'

by thewhitestripe

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

The story is incomplete without carman and an office orgy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Don't listen to that moron... This was one of your best stories yet!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
very good story

I think Gavin should have been flushed out on the first page. I liked their sex but it would have been hotter if you'd given them some more arousing dialogue.

And

"I nodded and placed my left hand on top of her ass, gripping my cock firmly around the base with my right so it wouldn't bend under the pressure of Courtney's tight pussy. I pushed down on her ass as I pushed my thick cock up and into her cunt."

You've gotta choose. "Cunt" is your word. "Pussy" is for sissy's.

Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Enjoyable

But perhaps the author should have read the first chapters - This is NOT the Courtney we encountered in chapters 2 & 3 by any stretch of the imagination. Confusing, and I had been looking forward to the protagonist's domination of that incarnation of his boss, rather than this inexperienced trembling submissive so similar to all of the other conquests made in this series.

calista241calista241almost 10 years ago
I like this series.

Bravo

john803john803over 9 years ago
5/24/14

That was Carmen not Courtney.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Courtney is great. More please

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