by thewhitestripe
But perhaps the author should have read the first chapters - This is NOT the Courtney we encountered in chapters 2 & 3 by any stretch of the imagination. Confusing, and I had been looking forward to the protagonist's domination of that incarnation of his boss, rather than this inexperienced trembling submissive so similar to all of the other conquests made in this series.
I think Gavin should have been flushed out on the first page. I liked their sex but it would have been hotter if you'd given them some more arousing dialogue.
And
"I nodded and placed my left hand on top of her ass, gripping my cock firmly around the base with my right so it wouldn't bend under the pressure of Courtney's tight pussy. I pushed down on her ass as I pushed my thick cock up and into her cunt."
You've gotta choose. "Cunt" is your word. "Pussy" is for sissy's.
Keep writing.