All Comments on 'The Order of Natural Pride Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hot!

I can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
great!!,

I really enjoyed the story, can't wait for the next!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
boring

i have read many scat stories and i am fond of scat but this is the worst of them all please make it more interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

I loved it. Gave nice imagery while setting up a nice scene and cant wait for the next parts.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Nice! Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Definitely needs a follow up

Dear Author,

Keep it coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
mutant

Really nice! I want the next chapter just now!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing!

Ignore the negative comment. This story is great, please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
awesome

This story is amazing, please continue this.

sirsnagglepusssirsnagglepussalmost 9 years ago
Hottest thing I've read in ages

Please please write more!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing

Simply amazing first chapter, please write more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
nice story

yes please continue

Dustoff30Dustoff30almost 8 years ago
So exciting!

I just love the story. I have read it so many times now and it makes me cum each time. Hope chapter 2 comming soon! Please! !

bill98465bill98465over 7 years ago
more

more more more

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