All Comments on 'The Origins of a Merciless Tease'

But awesome lol. Keep this one goin please!!

luv ur theme, sabrina sounds amazing, hopefully she torments the dad next-pls keep going!

Please tell me you plan to make this story a thousand parts long. The diary combined with the first person narration is a great way to describe her teasing from both the male and female points of view. And the jealousy angle is a well-conceived element to multiply the frustration of our poor protagonist. Teasing is always best when it has an emotional aspect in addition to the purely sexual. Maybe the narrator should actually fall in love with her while she continues to tease, deny, and taunt his feelings? Can't wait for the next installment!

So horny - can't wait for more.

So hot. I loved it and I want more of her callous teasing and manipulation ;)

The best

Big fan of your 'Ruthless Tease' stories, looking forward to more great writing!

It's great to have you back and writting! Loved the story and hoping for many more.

What's the idea behind this concept and where are you planning on taking it?

Really excited for the next chapter, keep it up!

Waiting for the next chapter :-)

Great stuff.

Your stories are amazing, it's so good to see you back to writing! I really look forward to your next creation!

Can't wait to read more

I was a fan of you 10 years ago and I'm just amazed about the one. Please write some more!

A ruthless tease is still one of my favorite erotica stories. I have to confess that I secretly thing about the storyline whenever I have sex with my husband - it gets me off every time. I can't wait to see more!

I would just love to see a continuation.

Love this - amazing story. Love you to do more and finish up your earlier stories too :)

This story was a masterpiece in the genre of teasing and denial. The author is clearly a gifted writer. His descriptions of Samantha's awesome power over men definitely made my heart beat faster. She did everything but reduce poor Scotty to a warm puddle on the floor. Though it's been two years since this story was written, the author would make my day if he wrote a sequel.

Will there ever be a continue to this, or is it a one and done ?

I don't know if you will come back, but can you pls continue this story its really great.

Clever premise.

For me, at least, it'd have been better if she'd needed to feel his cock to confirm how big/hard it was.

Or asked him if he liked her body? What part/s? What would he like to to to it/them?

Seeing him so excited had made her excited. Could he smell her excitement?

Did he watch porn? What kind? Did he masturbate when watching? How often? When was the last time? How did he do it? Would he show her?

Four stars.