All Comments on 'The Ornament'

Your good at this m8

First person can be a challenging POV for a writer. This is one of the best first-person narratives I've seen, particularly in the MC genre. The bi-sexual element was a nice touch as well. Nicely imagined and deftly realized.

I want one of those!!

It didn't unnecessarily drag and managed to sustain my interest enough to read every word. A few metaphors (see: "Kevin shook like a live wire") threw me off a bit, but overall, I liked this effort a lot. 4/5 from my side (Really Liked it).

Wonderful. You never fail to please!

Big Story! Well done!

I love the elements where letting go is the main character's idea. Thank you for sharing.

Where can I find a tree ornament like that?

Excellent story, TinyBeth.