All Comments on 'The Panties Ch. 01'

by sweetliljac

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
On "edge" here!

Oh dear. We have a "situation" here. "On edge", waiting for Chapter 2.

AbdulbenthereAbdulbenthereabout 13 years ago
Not bad for a first submission, please write more

Not bad for a first submission, please write more. I like the way you, female writer, get into a male character's head: Us guys are so easy to figure out!

Check out some of my stories at

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=753793&page=submissions

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Also waiting.

You left us wanting more...A nice first story written by a very hot looking young lady!

sweetliljacsweetliljacabout 13 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2

Chapter 2 is coming soon... Sub titled "Jaclyn's Discovery"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Are you, sweetliljac, the younger sister in this story? Great job and I am looking forward to more.

sweetliljacsweetliljacabout 13 years agoAuthor
Me

Yes, I am Jaclyn and I'm the younger sister in this story, and the main character in the second chapter.

CoupleLQQkingCoupleLQQkingabout 13 years ago
Nice Work!

I really liked your submission; please continue with the story. I am always surprised to read when the opposite sex can get inside the head of the other and effectively tell a compelling and arousing story from their POV.

baronearthbaronearthabout 13 years ago

a really sexy debut im looking forward to a lot more stories from you

sweetliljacsweetliljacabout 13 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2

Chapter 2 has been submitted, please look for it soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
HOTTT🔥🔥🔥

Ohhh Myyyy, this story was short, butt extremely hot for this Pantyboi. I've had a panty/lingerie fetish 👙 since I was very young. Ur story pushed all of my buttons. Thx for sharing this one, pls continue the adventures of Nick.

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JodailyJodaily8 months ago

Loved it! Short and sweet. Gonna be hard to explain when those gooey panties stick to the bottom of the drawer, smelling like cum. I bet little sis will recognize that smell right away.

Great stroking story. Can't wait to read the next two. Liljac causing a big jack attack. Thanks

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