All Comments on 'The Passion of a Virgin'

Too many spelling and grammar mistakes spoil what was at best a mediocre story. Dont bother with a sequel.

I doubt the previous commenter could do any better - keep writing, work on it. I really like stories that have developed characters, so your use of personality, such as shyness, is something I find pretty valuable.

Nice story, but it built up to a very weak ending.