All Comments on 'The Perfect Vacation'

Always enjoy stories with a surprise.

Post more soon.

You really paint a picture of the action. The little details you include help make it seem real, without being tedious. It reminded me of long bus rides through Spain with my girlfriend. Look forward to the next chapter, hope it is as well constructed.

can't wait to read pt 2. i'm in a relationship with a japanese man and love reading stories like this!

Keep writing Sara Sensei. I enjoy your stories and writing style. You're doing a good job.