by 0131aj
Damn good story! Wish you had a couple more chapters! One of
The best I've read!!
Great series.
I gave all three installments a five.
Some pronoun, punctuation problems, maybe typos, but the grammar was appropriate and the writing was tight.
Your vocabulary and word choices are a primer for other porn writers on the site because you use words that are contextually correct as opposed to writers who read like a thesaurus extraction.
Really a great series!