All Comments on 'The Power Ch. 01'

There is a nafu he got struck 2007 and awoke in 2010. Mike said six years. Check that on your next edit, unless you are hinting he has other problems. Nice setting and start.

A little background on the characters would help. How old is Mike? What is his home situation? The same with Mrs. Gordon, how old, married or divorced etc...? The concept is a good start tho.

"So I have been in a coma for over 6 years?" Since he was struck in 2007 and the now in the story is 2010 that makes it about 3 years plus or minus a few months.

I like the story.

I quite like this so far, but as has been said a bit of back story wouldn't go amiss and if you don't mind lengthening the chapters would be quite good.