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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very Interesting!

I thought the mating ritual was odd for a human, but then the end made everything clear.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hilarious!

This was very entertaining, thanks for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice

Figured out your characters weren't human. Still enjoyed what was a surprise ending. A few misspellings also caught my eye. Nonetheless, well done.

dab10dab10over 11 years agoAuthor
thank you

thank you for your kind words this was a fun one to write i i will probably get it edited and re post soon

thank you

Dab10

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OK..............WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

firemanlitfiremanlitalmost 9 years ago

Hey, a story about my x-wife!

CarcamCarcamover 8 years ago
Beautiful!

WOW ! About two weeks after I read this story for the first time, I saw two Praying Mantas's mating - - the same thing happened !!! I had to read this story again .Great story writting, I love your style - please KEEP writing !!

CarCam

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Loved this

Very hot and perfect ending.

DrSemblanceDrSemblanceover 7 years ago

VERY creative !

well done

SomeOneTwoThreeSomeOneTwoThreeabout 6 years ago
Great story!

So unexpected.

Top rating from me.

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can email me i don't bite (unless you ask) about my writing my problem is i grew up with a graphomotor skill deficit my brain worked to fast for my hands i had trouble with spelling and writing when i learned to type it open that world to me but i still spell phonically i t...