All Comments on 'The Price of Selfishness'

nice job, really nice job. i had it in the back of my mind from the beginning, but you handled it so well and there was always an element of doubt. hope to read more of your work!

hey, good job! a little of everything that i love, and you were very creative. encore!

It was a good story, StrayBird. It did remind me of a story I read a long time ago that was similar. But that tale was under different circumstances. This stands out apart from it. I look forward to see what else you come up with.

thats the worst and best story I've ever heard in my life!!!

I should have seen that ending a mile away. Great writing. I wasn't even expecting that twist at all.