All Comments on 'The Prometheus Invasion Ch. 04'

Nice!

you definitely have my interest, but the uber short chapters are maddening...

Even if I had to wait an extra while, this should be chapter 2 not 4... 1+2 and 3+4...

Either way, I continue to be amused... ill just have to wait for the next 4+ chapters to come out before I return to read, otherwise its such a disappointment to finally get to something interesting only to have the chapter dead-pan

But ouch lots of needles :) and injections glad they are unconscious. I look forward to finding out what happens when they wake up. Yes, a longer 2 page story would be great but please continue to write more as much as you can to continue. Thanks

Male 55 YO USA

Having commented on the slow pace of the previous chapters, I really had to say that it is great to see thing starting to develope. Good imagery and dialog.

I will have to retread the section on the samples though. I was confused when it described The character holdin eight sample, three in one and and four in the other.

All the needle work made me cringe... Having had shots down there for a vasectomy this brought back those memories... I have to admit I wish the chapters were longer though.