All Comments on 'The Proposition'

I thought you made this first time experience seem true to life, and also very sexy. Thanks for sharing, Mike

briliant is not the word outstanding would be. so very hot and horny.

i really love lesbian and bi sexual stories. it seem so right.

Looking for to much more. Hot Hot Hot

I enjoyed the story. Well done! Thanks.

I usually don't even bother to read stories that are less than 2 or 3 pages, but I did enjoy this one. Well written, realistic, and the sex wasn't over the top or cheesy--all things I find essential in a good erotic story. Keep writing, looking forward to reading more (hopefully lesbian stories :P) from you in the future.

Very nicely done ... I think you have a great future not only here but in novel work as well. Very descriptive and enticing.

Very nice. Sexy and very well written. Keep writing.

Loved it. Fabulous descriptions. I really felt like I was there in the room with them.

I'm So Happy That The Two "Friends" Have Be"CUM"

Lovers. Female - Female Love Is So Much Better !

Kisses

I would like to read more of this encounter and see where it will lead. How about a Part 2, please?

Beautiful. I would love to read another chapter of this story. :)

Mental breakdown - midlife crisis call it what you want. This woman needed a sabbatical yet found the meaning of life between her friends legs. If the story lacks seduction then have an intro that relates to the rest of the story. Otherwise it's just sex for the sake of sex.