All Comments on 'The Proposition'

Mental breakdown - midlife crisis call it what you want. This woman needed a sabbatical yet found the meaning of life between her friends legs. If the story lacks seduction then have an intro that relates to the rest of the story. Otherwise it's just sex for the sake of sex.

Beautiful. I would love to read another chapter of this story. :)

I would like to read more of this encounter and see where it will lead. How about a Part 2, please?

I'm So Happy That The Two "Friends" Have Be"CUM"

Lovers. Female - Female Love Is So Much Better !

Kisses

Loved it. Fabulous descriptions. I really felt like I was there in the room with them.

Very nice. Sexy and very well written. Keep writing.

Very nicely done ... I think you have a great future not only here but in novel work as well. Very descriptive and enticing.

I usually don't even bother to read stories that are less than 2 or 3 pages, but I did enjoy this one. Well written, realistic, and the sex wasn't over the top or cheesy--all things I find essential in a good erotic story. Keep writing, looking forward to reading more (hopefully lesbian stories :P) from you in the future.

I enjoyed the story. Well done! Thanks.

Looking for to much more. Hot Hot Hot

briliant is not the word outstanding would be. so very hot and horny.

i really love lesbian and bi sexual stories. it seem so right.

I thought you made this first time experience seem true to life, and also very sexy. Thanks for sharing, Mike