All Comments on 'The Proposition Ch. 04'

Not an erotic coupling at all.

The first and second were goo, the third sucked, and this one sucks even more. Sorry, but I am done.....

So he truely loves his wife but wants to keep on screwing Stacey? Yeah this tory has gotten stupid, I'd quit.

Expected lots erotic coupling....got group shit and (worse yet) gay shit. Not what this story needs. Sad.

If anyone knows Malta as I do, then this is pure fiction. Would never happen.

You need to edit your stories, as the spelling errors are too frequent.

You paint a picture of Stacey as being a very correct wife type, then suddenly she is a raving nympho

You emphasize cock sizes too much. Chris's cock gained an inch from 7 to 8 in the story, how could that be, other then a spelling error

I give this a 2 out of 10, as it's drivel

I really enjoyed this story, and hope that there is more to cum...hehe...

I cannot understand the negative comments about this... fantasy, because it is, like most stories here, fantasy...

Not a 5 , but I would give it a good 4 stars...

PS... I copied the whole text into a document... I could see no spelling errors... or am I wrong...

PPS... Hope part 5 is here soon enough.

I really enjoy this story

Hope part 5 is here soon enough.

I liked it.... only fantasy...like all stories on literotica

Does this go no further? Not a good way to end!

Please extend this storyline.

Will be continuing this story pretty soon... Hope all will be wrapped up by end February2020. This story will then be released as a single file. Thanks. IM.

This a great story but needs a conclusion, the author said it was coming by the end of February and it is now the first of July. So many of this authors stories need conclusions. There is nothing more frustrating than to read a story that leaves you hanging without a proper ending. If it was finished I would give it a 5 but unfinished it gets a 3.