All Comments on 'The Real Estate Connection Ch. 05'

I love the story and am glad to see the next chapter. I hope there are more on the way soon. I try to be patient but when the story is good it is hard to wait. Keep up the phenominal work!

I love the story and am glad to see the next chapter. I hope there are more on the way soon. I try to be patient but when the story is good it is hard to wait. Keep up the phenominal work!

I love the story and am glad to see the next chapter. I hope there are more on the way soon. I try to be patient but when the story is good it is hard to wait. Keep up the phenominal work!

Loved it!!! Please hurry with the next chapter!!!!

Absolutely awesome!... Great sex & excitement - you sure know how to get me going! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Hugs & kisses to you! xxxxx

Good Stuff!

Well, stumbled into 1 and ended up staying for the lot - in one read! Completely blew my schedule! (so much for time management, eh?!). And now, like everyone else - MORE! MORE! MORE! NOW!! (please)

Fantastic storyline, as always. Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.It's the best story on Literotica, and also amongst the best sex. Keep at it and let us have another soon

My initials are MFB. I am retired military with all my years overseas in SOS positions. DAMN fine story..... and yes my 'people' use to tell me what MFB stood for a lot.

I remember reading this story several years ago - and enjoying it greatly!

And it did

Damn

Calling everyone in sight "Baby" every other line is getting pretty old. Do people talk like that? Then there is the punctuation. When you address a person you need a comma. "Hello, Fred." You have "No problem baby" and similar things all over the story. It is not a "no problem baby" but rather, "No problem, Baby." See how that works? Huge difference when reading the story.

Becoming unbearably slow, predictable and repetitive. Frankly, not very entertaining anymore. There's a limit to how much excitement endless shopping, sex and being in relaxed control of everything can provide. Gave up, lookin elsewhere. Tx for a great effort anyway.