All Comments on 'The Reawakening of Dr. Clark Ch. 16'

by The_Maestro_Braddock

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DjeterDjeterover 11 years ago
awesome

Great addition to the story. You know how to build the tension.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

just divorce the wife if she is such a distant woman and keep mallory. if the wife is not in on the affair then she is having one of her own and doesnt care if he has one too.

watchurmanwatchurmanover 11 years ago
Finally!

Excellent chapter, finally moving in a decisive direction. Much better than the previous couple of editions. This could be the hottest part of the story so far, the Zenith in this piece was Dr Clark finally submitting to his feelings and egging Mal on to scream. Totally wrong, twisted and really HOT! Made me tingle anyway. A bit of humiliation of Gina before she gets kicked to the curb would just set this series off brilliantly.

Well done and thanks from an avid fan!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I hope this doesn't end soon. The continual update

While keeping the content hot (particularly the dialogue)

Has been great. So, many other things can be added.

Maybe an encounter with with the wife while he is in the

Closet watching (no relationship though), Only to have

Him come out desperate afterwards. Possibly a little

BDSM? There is so much more that can still be done,

But the continued updates and quality writing had been

Great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Like Where This Storyline Is Going

I am glad you are getting back to the conflicted feelings of Mal and Greg as they become closer and experience intimacy. Please stay on this track. It makes the story exciting.

3xblackxstars3xblackxstarsover 11 years ago

love this story. need more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More!!

This is the best literotica story Iv ever found, please please please keep adding new chapters, leave uson the dge of the seat......hope to see more chapters soon. Thanks!!!!!!

SteveMcInnisSteveMcInnisover 11 years ago
Doc is no longer an "unwilling" participant

It's nice that the doc is finally, fully on board with Mal.

Nmorgan2274Nmorgan2274over 1 year ago

It's all about to go sideways🫣

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