All Comments on 'The Rich Bitch Ch. 05'

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Haphaestion2004Haphaestion2004almost 9 years ago

A hot story, no doubt about it ! But it's a pity the many mistakes you make, "there" instead of "their", "your" instead of "you're", "then" instead of "than" ...

It's a bit annoying, you really need to see about these grammatical errors, and others. It ruins how one enjoys the story.

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