All Comments on 'The Ride'

by the_bragis

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
brilliant

she is one hot little fuck, ha , takes an oldewr man to show her WHAT its like to be totaly fucked, i loved it

NawtyMeNawtyMeover 10 years ago
I liked your short story.

It started out good and flowed into the rest of the story. But something happened that, in my opinion made it "die" or "change" the flow. I'm not sure if it was the way the orgasm came(pardon the pun), but something went missing that threw me off on it.

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