All Comments on 'The Ring of Cronus Pt. 20'

Just wondering if you noticed that you changed john to roy for about two paragraphs

Seems John's name changed a few times in this story to Roy ...

You can call me John, you can call me Roy or you can call me...? WTF dude? Seems the ring changes this guy's name (in several chapters) almost as much as it does his dick and the women's minds/bodies. E D I T O R puhleeze.

There was a bit of confusion with names - changing from John to Roy to John again...

All i would want to ask is why does roy appear out of nowhere??

Stop mistaking johns name for Roy, this is far from the first time you hsve done it.

A few of the ladies' names have undergone temporary metamorphoses also. Perhaps because the sex has become so repetitive, the name changes are meant to stave off boredom.

I would like 2 say "THANK YOU" ur story puts me to sleep like no other......

So Roy took the place of John? Just a typo!

i think you missed something in editing

I've found several edit errors. I love the story but not the errors. I'd like to see more of your writings.

Several times main charscters name was changed from John to Roy very confusing at the end.

i am sick of reading this it is just one continuous semen spout very little really happens.All these chapters and it is all the same no development no characters and now John is Roy....whatever I won't miss reading any more of this crap.

Who the hell is Roy???? Its been a couple times where you forget the name of your own main character

John is suddenly called Roy?

Too much sex and not enough story. No character development. no information on what the ring is capable of other than reading minds and increasing libidos.

"Who the hell is Roy????" Just not as good as the rest of The Ring of Cronus.

Who the hell is Roy?

So....who is Roy?

In the middle after the wedding.... "Roy" appears..

Enjoying the story... Can overlook typo

WTF Roy?