by 2Xwidderwoman
It kept me interested right to the last sentence. I wish I could write like that. Who knows? maybe with time. Anyway I like this story a lot and glad to see you back writing again.
Well written story, that made me think. I hate stories that make me think. Don't do it again.
Oh Widderwoman, a western, but dealing with the complexities and emotions of life, just as in your other stories. I hope that this is only the beginning, that maybe there are other western/historical tales awaiting birth in your fertile imagination! Oh yeah — and the next one can be longer — I'm greedy to hear your words...
The quality of the work is amazing. I will certainly read your other works. I have to admit that for me at least we did not reach a calm cusp in the life of Richard. His relationships with so many people are calling for resolution and clarification. Really fine lit...
Excellent story. It was really an artwork. Non-Erotic stories are also pleasure to read especially like this story. It was really a pleasure reading your story. Thanks for the beautiful story. More Pleaseeee.
Absolutely riveting. You did such a wonderful job of bringing the characters to life. There is enough of the unresolved in the story to maybe do a sequel? Just a thought. Others seem to think that way also. Great to have you writing again.
I thought the story was about folks helping folks. Neighbors or relatives helping each other to get through tough times. His brother would rather die than let him marry a whore. A time when you could trust a man's promise or handshake to be truthful and his word completely true. Oh how times have changed. A slower paced life, where travel wasn't taken for granted, counting the length of a trip in days instead of hours. A well written and great story,with a lot of open issues that lets the reader make up their mind. Thanks .......Rich
I believe this is an unfinished work, The beginning of an epic novel that, when done, should be submitted to a major publisher. You go, girl!
Well-written and sad and thought-provoking.
Thank you so much!
ohio