All Comments on 'The Road Back'

by 2Xwidderwoman

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JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969about 15 years ago
Nice story.

It kept me interested right to the last sentence. I wish I could write like that. Who knows? maybe with time. Anyway I like this story a lot and glad to see you back writing again.

CastleStoneCastleStoneabout 15 years ago
Western Gem

Well written story, that made me think. I hate stories that make me think. Don't do it again.

PostScriptorPostScriptorabout 15 years ago
Ah! The pleasure of the thing

Oh Widderwoman, a western, but dealing with the complexities and emotions of life, just as in your other stories. I hope that this is only the beginning, that maybe there are other western/historical tales awaiting birth in your fertile imagination! Oh yeah — and the next one can be longer — I'm greedy to hear your words...

coaster2coaster2about 15 years ago
Perfect

Just as I expected ... perfect!

Coaster

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Wow

What a great story!

Boyd

bruce22bruce22about 15 years ago
Excellent Writing

The quality of the work is amazing. I will certainly read your other works. I have to admit that for me at least we did not reach a calm cusp in the life of Richard. His relationships with so many people are calling for resolution and clarification. Really fine lit...

KOTKKOTKabout 15 years ago
Wonderful artwork.

Excellent story. It was really an artwork. Non-Erotic stories are also pleasure to read especially like this story. It was really a pleasure reading your story. Thanks for the beautiful story. More Pleaseeee.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Masterful

Absolutely riveting. You did such a wonderful job of bringing the characters to life. There is enough of the unresolved in the story to maybe do a sequel? Just a thought. Others seem to think that way also. Great to have you writing again.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
A trip back in time

I thought the story was about folks helping folks. Neighbors or relatives helping each other to get through tough times. His brother would rather die than let him marry a whore. A time when you could trust a man's promise or handshake to be truthful and his word completely true. Oh how times have changed. A slower paced life, where travel wasn't taken for granted, counting the length of a trip in days instead of hours. A well written and great story,with a lot of open issues that lets the reader make up their mind. Thanks .......Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
What is the point of non-erotic stories here?

n/t

lancewmlancewmabout 15 years ago
Very well written

And so thoughtful.

OleTroubadorOleTroubadorover 14 years ago
Superb!

I believe this is an unfinished work, The beginning of an epic novel that, when done, should be submitted to a major publisher. You go, girl!

ohioohioabout 13 years ago
Wonderful, moving story

Well-written and sad and thought-provoking.

Thank you so much!

ohio

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