All Comments on 'The Road Back'

by 2Xwidderwoman

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ohioohioabout 13 years ago
Wonderful, moving story

Well-written and sad and thought-provoking.

Thank you so much!

ohio

OleTroubadorOleTroubadorover 14 years ago
Superb!

I believe this is an unfinished work, The beginning of an epic novel that, when done, should be submitted to a major publisher. You go, girl!

lancewmlancewmabout 15 years ago
Very well written

And so thoughtful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
What is the point of non-erotic stories here?

n/t

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
A trip back in time

I thought the story was about folks helping folks. Neighbors or relatives helping each other to get through tough times. His brother would rather die than let him marry a whore. A time when you could trust a man's promise or handshake to be truthful and his word completely true. Oh how times have changed. A slower paced life, where travel wasn't taken for granted, counting the length of a trip in days instead of hours. A well written and great story,with a lot of open issues that lets the reader make up their mind. Thanks .......Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Masterful

Absolutely riveting. You did such a wonderful job of bringing the characters to life. There is enough of the unresolved in the story to maybe do a sequel? Just a thought. Others seem to think that way also. Great to have you writing again.

KOTKKOTKabout 15 years ago
Wonderful artwork.

Excellent story. It was really an artwork. Non-Erotic stories are also pleasure to read especially like this story. It was really a pleasure reading your story. Thanks for the beautiful story. More Pleaseeee.

bruce22bruce22about 15 years ago
Excellent Writing

The quality of the work is amazing. I will certainly read your other works. I have to admit that for me at least we did not reach a calm cusp in the life of Richard. His relationships with so many people are calling for resolution and clarification. Really fine lit...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Wow

What a great story!

Boyd

coaster2coaster2about 15 years ago
Perfect

Just as I expected ... perfect!

Coaster

PostScriptorPostScriptorabout 15 years ago
Ah! The pleasure of the thing

Oh Widderwoman, a western, but dealing with the complexities and emotions of life, just as in your other stories. I hope that this is only the beginning, that maybe there are other western/historical tales awaiting birth in your fertile imagination! Oh yeah — and the next one can be longer — I'm greedy to hear your words...

CastleStoneCastleStoneabout 15 years ago
Western Gem

Well written story, that made me think. I hate stories that make me think. Don't do it again.

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969about 15 years ago
Nice story.

It kept me interested right to the last sentence. I wish I could write like that. Who knows? maybe with time. Anyway I like this story a lot and glad to see you back writing again.

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