All Comments on 'The Romantic Vacation'

far and away too disjointed to follow comfortably,,, seems like you are trying to cram way too much into a single story

We beg of you to please stop this. It is too much like swinging and that is what our parents were doing. There was a fight and now we live with Dad and our Grandparents. Our Mother has left and we miss her. By the way, what will Donny's wife think of Terie and husband when she finds out, and believe you me, she will find out.

Laura & Lisa, bi sisters at CU

I am a big fan of your work. As much as I want future chapters of your other stories, I now am thrilled with this newest story. Please continue your work!!!!

Thanks Again.

All this wimp husband crap is so BORING.

What real man would ask another to fuck his wife?? None, right?What wife would want to fuck her husband's brother?? If she did th eguy should kick her out and get a real wife, not a whore pretending to be one.

I gave this one point

There is no flow to this story. The writer does little to follow through on one event or conversation before heading off in another direction. Pick a theme and handle it thoroughly.

A whore with a cuck and his brother? That's sick.