All Comments on 'The Runaway Ch. 02'

The balance between prose and dialogue is near pitch-perfect. You propel the story along in both cases. It's engaging, erotic when it needs to be, but also with a pop novelists sense of plot and story -- where the sex is only a distraction and not the thrust.

This seems very polished. You have great skill as a writer.

I love the subtle way one is drawn into caring about these marginal figures on the American landscape.