All Comments on 'The Sacrifice'

A well-written descriptive story. Your details and the build up of anticipation was wonderfully done, leaving me breathless. The only thing I would maybe improve is your environmental description, but that hardly is the point of the short and may be unnecessary. Thank you for this great short story, I'll be sure to look into your other work!

Beautiful and sad! This was a wonderfully written piece! Thank you for sharing!