All Comments on 'The Secret of Bond Manor'

has been mentioned on today's New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout.

Very rich situation which begs for development. If expanded to include some characterization and emotion, it could be an incredible base for a fairly long story.

Enjoyed it but it seemed too short to allow the characters to reveal themselves.

Also, IMHO, with old manors, ancient buildings and so on, it might have been better with a period setting.

Anyway, Good Luck.

Thanks all for positive comments and suggestions... Look out for Confessions of a Check Out Chick Vol I - soon...

Cheers,

Phil.

Thanks all for positive comments and suggestions... Look out for Confessions of a Check Out Chick Vol I - soon...

Cheers,

Phil.

Too Short

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