All Comments on 'The Secret of Bond Manor'

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Too Short

Thanks all for positive comments and suggestions... Look out for Confessions of a Check Out Chick Vol I - soon...

Cheers,

Phil.

Thanks all for positive comments and suggestions... Look out for Confessions of a Check Out Chick Vol I - soon...

Cheers,

Phil.

Enjoyed it but it seemed too short to allow the characters to reveal themselves.

Also, IMHO, with old manors, ancient buildings and so on, it might have been better with a period setting.

Anyway, Good Luck.

Very rich situation which begs for development. If expanded to include some characterization and emotion, it could be an incredible base for a fairly long story.

has been mentioned on today's New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout.