All Comments on 'The Seducer: Mission Impossible Ch. 01'
by austin_erotica
- 30 Comments
Anonymousover 14 years agoThis sounds like a hot, hot storyline. I can't wait to read about The Seducer's attempts (and hopefully, hard-earned success) in seducing this married woman he has as his current assignment. Very intriguing story. Please don't stop!
Anonymousover 14 years agoanybody who would write this garbage is just a twit and never had a mother.
Anonymousover 14 years agoanybody who would write this garbage is just a twit and never had a mother.
Anonymousover 14 years agoanybody who would write this garbage is just a twit and never had a mother.
Anonymousover 14 years agoanybody who would write this garbage is just a twit and never had a mother.
Anonymousover 14 years agoanybody who would write this garbage is just a twit and never had a mother.
Anonymousover 14 years agoanybody who would write this garbage is just a twit and never had a mother.
Anonymousover 14 years agoAll the sluts, whores, and swingers on this site. LOVE doesn't matter, a woman married or not will fuck anyone she wants LOVE has nothing to do with it. Chapter two will see the wife groveling on the floor taking up the arse from the seducer while the husband wanks off his little prick.
Anonymousover 14 years agoGrow up. If you have a point make it once. The recent practice of multiple posting is just stupid. -- UK CYNIC
Rehnquistover 14 years agoIgnore the naysayers who lack appreciation of originality. Your story begins by making each of the characters mysterious. Why is the seducer so jaded? Will the perfect wife fall prey? If she does, does the client seek to truly love her or to just possess her? Yep, all the ingredients are there from the very beginning, and I can't wait to see how it goes.
Anonymousover 14 years ago<p>Good grammar, though you are missing the "" around thoughts as well. You need those for direct quotes from any character.</p>
<p>Spell checked and no incorrect words.</p>
<p>Plotting is decent, and you avoid alot of the usual squicks. I'd guess that most of the hate mail is from just one loser.</p>
<p>The way I see it, this guy is expensive, and only gets hired by rich folk. I'm sure plenty of those marriages weren't for love.</p>
<p>The only real problem here is that he's effectively a prostitute (gigilo is too kind IMNSHO), and courts frown on fidelity checks that go as far a having sex, so all this has to be kept hush-hush</p>
<p>Keep the chapters flowing.</p>
Anonymousover 14 years agoGood beginning. Very good beginning in fact. I like your writing style and look forward to your next contribution. Just a guess but I'm willing to bet that your style would be dynamite when utilizing the nc/reluctance theme.
ryu77over 14 years agoHe doesn't believe in LOVE because probably his wife cheated on him. He entered this "business" to prove (to himself)that women can easily cheat. What I want to know if Jennifer will not resist. I hope James doesn't end with Jennifer, because it will prove his reasoning. Great job, will be waiting for more.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI enjoyed this story and cannot understand why the negative comments by some. I could care less who you are. You have created a great story with a unique story line. Keep up the efforts and I'm looking forward to more of your work.
Anonymousover 14 years agoit's bitter pessimists trying to write an erotic story. I could not find anything erotic here, the story might be written fairly well but it's just not erotic or making possibly anybody horny.
Anonymousover 14 years agowith a fairly credible plot and perhaps the right kind of sex for some people; but for me sex has to be tight tied to the emotional confliction between a couple in love and her innately grained promiscuity. An illicitly fucked wife gets beneath the skin and produces a lot of emotional sex drive. That's good, speaking for myself. Everyone to their own. Thanks for an interesting read and I'll check out your profile...Mancelt.
KOTKover 14 years ago136 out of 137, wow!!! 1 case was unsuccessful, I guess it was maybe of his own wife OR maybe, just maybe he must have falled in love with the woman (His Mission?) Anyway, a great start & I'll come back for more. Thanks for sharing.
digdaddyrichover 14 years agoThe main character is extremely devious in his encounters with women, and the author is weaving a web of sex and cheating lust. Well planned and very well written, with a lot of different avenues this story can travel. Thanks for this opening chapter to what I hope to be a thrilling story.
Anonymousover 12 years agoI read your other series and it was awesome! So far, this one is living up to that. You're an excellent writer!
Anonymousover 3 years agoIn spite of being written after this series
The Seducer: Origins, a three-part series,
actually gives background for the present series.
It will also speak to some of the issues raised by commenters,
such as his ex-wife and also his sole failed case.
Although other series by this author
have following chapters listed in the ending sidebar
Also in This Series,
the followup chapters for both the present series
and for The Seducer: Origins
must be accessed on the Submissions page.
Paul in Oklahoma
