All Comments on 'The Seduction of Laura Ch. 01'

by Mister_Bates

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
More please!

What a great start! Let's keep this one going!!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great stuff!

Wonderfully erotic and very real, a totally believable best friends dynamic described with real heat.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Keep going....

and going, and going.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Sweet!

Nice! It was short bout oh-so-ood! Keep them coming, friend :)

Mister_BatesMister_Batesabout 14 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I wasn't sure how this story would be received - thanks for the positive comments so far. I only hope the subsequent chapters aren't a disappointment!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
MMMMMM

that is so hot

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