All Comments on 'The Seduction Plan Ch. 05'

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LadyPartsLadyPartsalmost 12 years ago
Engrossing tale.

I Love Dor! Wonderful characters, all of them.

Fabulous story with such a great plot. There are very few tales on Lit that don't telegraph the resolution. I hope this is going to end with an HEA, but I have no idea how you're going to make that happen! Looking forward to the rest.

GrumpyGambyGrumpyGambyalmost 12 years ago
Excellent writing!

You are superb with dialogue. This is a great story. The innocence Dor shows about her sexual nature, how it is blossoming and she has no real method to gain understanding and how it colors her perspective is fascinating. Please keep going with this story.

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Writer. Hasn't finished all of her stories because life proves more and more difficult every. damn. year. But she's still trying.

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