All Comments on 'The Serpent's Embrace Ch. 03'

love this! Neerral sounds super sexy! <3 Lillian, KR.

today, i read all 3 chapters of your story. I noticed you posting your stories before hand, but i will admit i was a bit reluctant to read it...not knowing how i would think of the story when it has to do with a snake-sex ( i have afear of snakes.. lmao)...

BUT, as i started to read it, i actually started to like the story more and more. And now i am dieing to know what happens next to them. :)

(im still afraid of snakes and always will be, but at least i love this story....does this make sence? lol)

I am in love with this story. Please continue.

im now hooked please write more i cant waittt for more -ljm

cruel! To write three chapters and hook us up and then dump us to hang without an update! More! Now!

Hey write more plz!! Good story and i really want to see, or read in this case what happens next!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!

great story!! please continue with it!!

I demand you write more

It was starting to get really good please right some more soon, plus I admit I have a soft spot for "bad boys" with a soft spot.

Please please please write more of this story!! I would love to see her get pregnant!!! Maybe that's how her people serve them?