All Comments on 'The Serpent's Embrace'

I want more of this story as well please because I want to see and read if she got pregnant by the serpent and if she did get pregnant I wander how many little serpents/snakes she is going to have. And if she gets pregnant by him/his offspring for all eternity non stop forever and ever.So please more chapters of this story as well as more pages if a whole book about it. Thank you very much.

As the others wrote, this is a very unique story idea. I read your second chapter first and liked both very much. Hope you will continue with this.

Unique can't wait for a second chapter.

This is so unique, in the good way. It's an original peice, and I'd love if you made a sequel.

I love snakes and you combined it with something else I love. Well done. I hope you write more on this story because I want to know what she sees and if she'll escape...if she'll even want to?