by scriptordelecto
absolutely lovely...true emotion is important and you definitely got it right...its not always about the sex...but hey, the scene was steamy hot too..make some more stories! i'm gonna mark ya..
SD - your writing evokes vivid images of the interplay between your characters. I'm moved, aroused, and feel like I was the one experiencing the feelings and emotions of your characters. Wonderful! Rob
Very nicely written. I thought the dialog was good, and believable, and I enjoyed the pace of the story as well.
Good quality work, you should be proud of it.
Brian