All Comments on 'The Sexiest Woman I Ever Met Ch. 01'

It is a shame that your poor English and spelling ruin the flow of the story. You really need to get someone else to read your work before you expect us to do so!

The word is "grabbed" not "garbed"! The word is "ground" not "grinned"!

How come, near the end, they had dropped two people off after work instead of the usual one?

You really must correct your work before submitting it!

please get an editor,,, this has the potential to be a truely remarkable story if the mistakes were corrected.