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All Comments on 'The Shopping Trip'

by mackeyjaymes

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I agree, incorrect spelling puts me off what I'm reading. Not a bad story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good story-poor language

Need to seriously improve your English-misspells, bad grammar detract from the reading. Worth it to work on if you want to be good at this.

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