All Comments on 'The Solitary Arrow Ch. 15'

Perhaps you shoud have a word with your editor, hehe. I found an "is" that should nave been "his" haha. The writing was up to your usual excellent style. Thanks.

Your story is such a pleasure to read! I love the way you combine elements of a great fantasy novel, such as the exciting adventures Hyandai and Harlen experience out in the woods or when they retrieve the 'Ehladrel , with very visual descriptions of the sensual and intimate moments they share. Thanks a lot for posting your stories here. I check everyday to see if there's a new one.

I will have words with her about this. Confusing is for his is unacceptable. I shall do something rather...odd...to her tonight for her punishment. Amazing how much agony missing something by a mere 1.5 inches can cause.

Excellent story. Now if you would just stop writing all that other crap and give us more H&H I won't have to track you down and chain you to your computer. On a critical note: Is there something wrong with the word pussy? You have used every other possible word, including technical terms. It's like I can feel a pause before whatever word you use while you try to think of one you haven't used yet. Have you thought of using none at all?Example: Change He spread her opening wide and rammed his cock in. To: He spread her wide and rammed his cock in.Not elegant writing I admit but it shows my suggestion.Loved the story. Keep it up

Regarding comments by msboy8.Does he not realise that Feldarian grammar differs from our usage?Once again an excellent story,can't wait for the movie to come out,starring Arnie and ?

Your comment caused me to give thought to a 'cast' for Solitary Arrow. However, Arnie is far too old for the early-twenties Harlen. I propose the following cast members-

Harlen - Christian Bale, Hyandai - Amanda Bynes (mainly to see her nekkid), Trevir - Nick Price (child actor), Tammer - Sean Connery, Ceriandel - Johnny Depp, Loskenhour - Jennifer Connelly, and Wendy - Alexis Bledel.

I figure that cast would make just the performer budget about $200 million, give or take $25 million.